Infinity Hero

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12 Thoughts on “Infinity Hero

  1. Vaishnavee on April 26, 2015 at 8:28 am said:

    Make another chapter.
    The book is really good:)
    Keep it up

  2. federico on May 1, 2015 at 9:37 am said:

    I WANT MOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. federico on May 1, 2015 at 5:15 pm said:

    I NEEEEED IT!!! THE PRECIOUS JAJAJA LOL

  4. shuiko on May 17, 2015 at 7:45 pm said:

    Not going to lie… I prefer this premise and setting in this story over Phoenix, strictly based on the fact of ability to world build, and create a more interesting growth…

    to be honest Phoenix’s power spikes make no sense they seem all over the place.

    This seems to be more consistent ( so far only 5 chapters lol)

    ALso Ecchi.

    Also I feel like your writing has improved, and suites a more style where you can use the idea of explaining skills and concepts, which is more your strength. Your dialogue still needs to improve though.

    Also ecchi (Y)

    • Vijay Kakani on May 17, 2015 at 8:20 pm said:

      I see and am not surprised. Mentality switches between a third person and first person which sort of gave me headaches when I constantly switched between the modes to write them.

  5. Question? on June 4, 2015 at 6:46 am said:

    so are you dropping this? hopefully not because it is really interesting and seems to have a good story kinda like ‘the new-gate’ novel

  6. federico on August 11, 2016 at 4:03 am said:

    yay! you stated again!!

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