Make another chapter.
The book is really good:)
Keep it up
I will soon! 😉
I WANT MOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
Calm down, calm down. I’ll get to it soon. I’m just focused on writing Phoenix Rising for now.
*Wrings hands evily * Good Good
Oh geez… Don’t give me that! 😛
I NEEEEED IT!!! THE PRECIOUS JAJAJA LOL
Not going to lie… I prefer this premise and setting in this story over Phoenix, strictly based on the fact of ability to world build, and create a more interesting growth…
to be honest Phoenix’s power spikes make no sense they seem all over the place.
This seems to be more consistent ( so far only 5 chapters lol)
Also I feel like your writing has improved, and suites a more style where you can use the idea of explaining skills and concepts, which is more your strength. Your dialogue still needs to improve though.
Also ecchi (Y)
I see and am not surprised. Mentality switches between a third person and first person which sort of gave me headaches when I constantly switched between the modes to write them.
so are you dropping this? hopefully not because it is really interesting and seems to have a good story kinda like ‘the new-gate’ novel
yay! you stated again!!
I did. 🙂